Persuasive Writing

All zoos should be should down and release the animals back into their natural habitats. 
Planning:

Points For : 
Keeping them in cages is bad cause they are not getting that much space to move around and have to live in a small area
Animals should be able to run around the wilderness and not in a cage.
Zoos are also open to the public and people like to see animals and animals get scared when people approach them.

Points Against:
Animals are very unique animals and should be kept in zoos so they are not hunted and killed.
If the animals were released from the zoo they are going to endangered animals and are soon going to be instinct.
Animals in zoos are fed and looked after as if they were in the wildness they would have to look for their own food and they have no one to look after them and they might be killed by a predator.
Animals are safer than being in the wilderness hunted by predator and pests.
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Introduction
Should zoos be shut down and release the animals back into the natural habitat? I think animals should not be let into the wilderness because it is putting their lives at risks of extinction.

P1
Some animals that are in zoos are put there because they are at risk. Zoos are feeding the animals and looking after them whereas if they were in the wilderness they would have to hunt for their food and the adults have to protect the family. Zoos were made because our animals needed a place to live and to repopulate without having to worry about being hunted. Also, Zoos have special doctors (vets) for if an animal is not feeling well or the zookeeper feels th